![]() ![]() This novel is truly amazing in conveying a villain as a protagonist, no, not a dark hero just like many other novels with dark story but, the protagonist IS really a villain who doing many atrocities and despicable things and get off scot free! I read the original novel in Japanese (the latest are vol 13 by this day) so I don’t know if they censored it in the translation. Last updated on March 27th, 2020, 10:48pm It wouldn't be so bad if every time the author decides to go on these tangents, it is information that the reader doesn't even benefit from knowing. Mind you, the reader is already aware he has these swords, but for some reason, the author waited until the very moment the fight started to say anything else about them. Next thing, once the fight begins, the author decides to go off on this long explanation about the MC's two greatswords in the heat of the moment. So apparently the goblins and orcs just sat around and waited for them to do something. The party somehow has time to discuss the coming fight and what everyone is going to do. The goblins already know they are there, and outnumber them. The MC joins a party and they come across goblins and orcs. This is all information the reader should have already known about, rather than in the heat of the moment. ![]() Any time something happens, the MC does something, or a decision is made by someone, the next two or three paragraphs are spent explaining stuff. The way its structured makes it super obvious that the author just makes things up as he goes. My main complaint is that the author goes off on long tangents to explain things very often.
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